Wednesday, 4 August 2021

A Discovering Diamonds Review of Workhouse Waif by Elizabeth Keysian

1800s
England

"How can Bella Hart escape the hell of the Victorian workhouse? Fleeing the abuse that she suffered there, the lonely outcast hopes her new life in a factory town can provide the esteem and affection she craves. Torn between the worlds of masters and workers, Bella falls for the enigmatic Jack, but their relationship shatters when his true identity is revealed. In a desperate bid to revive her love, Jack unearths Bella's past, with tragic consequences. After a devastating fire, a secret emerges that seals Bella's fate, and that of everyone and everything she holds dear. Fans of Catherine Cookson and Victorian historical romances will love this book."

I read the book before I saw the official blurb and am glad that one of my initial thoughts was confirmed: Catherine Cookson fans will enjoy this. I really do mean that as a compliment, because I found that this book sits fairly and squarely in that sub-genre, and is a fine example of it.

Meeting Bella when she is a young inmate of the workhouse, we can fully understand what drives her, how her thought processes work, and how her childhood experiences shape her personality and affect her decisions. She's a rounded character; believable, and likeable. She's a product of her age and upbringing and inhabits the era perfectly. (So be warned: towards the end of the book she has a very 19th-century reaction to something which these days would not shock such a young woman in quite the same way. But I felt this made her a much more 'real' character).

Romance perhaps isn't my 'thing' but it didn't stop me enjoying this very tightly-plotted book. The twists and turns of the story are handled well, and although some characters are better drawn than others, none is a stereotype. I particularly liked Georgie Merriweather, who introduced himself to the reader by delighting in playing throwing games with his hat in a railway carriage.

I'd say that all the expected tropes for this type of story are there, but they are presented plausibly and the ups and downs of the story are well paced.

I think the author was brave in her choice to make her characters speak 'bad' English, which made them come alive. Bella and her fellow workhouse inmates frequently say 'would of' instead of 'would have', whereas the more educated characters speak correctly. Bella also has to remember to say 'my' instead of 'me' when talking to the posh folk e.g. 'A home of me own'. The way the less educated characters speak is refreshingly different from some other portrayals. The little errors in their speech were there, but were never annoying or overdone.

The only slight niggle I had was the frequent 'head-hopping' in the earlier chapters, where the point of view changed rapidly from paragraph to paragraph but this became less of an issue as the story progressed.

There were some lovely keen observations of a changing world. This is not a country full simply of 'rich' and 'poor'. Here, in an increasingly mechanised world, we have the industrialists, the nouveau riche, looking down on the workers, while the aristocracy, in their turn, look down on the mill owners. The historical setting was good, the characters lived and acted within that world, and the story-telling was great.




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© Annie Whitehead
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Monday, 2 August 2021

The Wolf Den by Elodie Harper

Book of the Month


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Fictional Drama
Ancient Rome
Pompeii
(contains explicit content and language)

Amara is a prostitute in a brothel in Pompeii. She's a slave and has no choice in her life. As she constantly reflects, she is nothing and she owns nothing. It wasn't always that way, once she was part of a loving family, her father a doctor in Greece, but his death brought poverty and she was sold to one of her father's clients supposedly as a house servant, but became a concubine - a mistress - and was then sold on by the client's wife as a prostitute. 

Life isn't all bad, Amara likes the other girls she lives with and they face their difficult life together, making things a little easier for each other; the only family they are likely to ever have, however bizarre.

Amara, however, has never forgotten her previous life, or how she came to be what she is now and she will never do as she's advised and accept her new reality. Things changed once before, they can change again. She just needs to find a patron who will make her free. Finding one is the challenge, one rich enough because Felix, the sociopath brothel owner, won't sell Amara cheaply - she's worth too much.

Despite this being written in the present tense, not my favourite, I didn't notice after a while as the narration flows really well. The characters are well written, the plot well constructed. The story does get a little bogged down in places, but nothing grates, nothing's out of place; some questions are not answered by the end, but, I suppose, some questions just can't be answered because no one knows what the answers are. 

I particularly enjoyed how the story is illustrated at the start of each chapter using snippets of graffiti found on the walls of Pompeii and Herculaneum and excerpts from Pliny and other writers. Clever, especially the graffiti, weaving this story into the real lives of those who had lived in Pompeii.

The language is modern, there's no attempt to make it sound like they really are ancient Romans; anachronistic, yes, using 'minutes' and 'cafe' among others, but it isn't offensive as the aim is to make the world as accessible to us as it was to them, to be as real and normal, and not other-worldly. There's no sense that the writer really believes that shops that sold ready-made food to eat on the premises really were called cafes or that they were all aware of how long a minute was, it is a means to an end.

If you are sensitive, maybe avoid because there are a lot of uses of the 'F' word to describe the act rather than as an expletive - it's about prostitutes, after all. But if you can overlook this, do, because, they may be whores, as they are so frequently referred to, but they are also real women with feelings, like any woman of any age or era.

I would certainly recommend this as a good, if a little long, read.  Amara eases her way in and you can't let her go.

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© Nicky Galliers
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Sunday, 1 August 2021

Guest Spot - Ruth Downie

Continuing our Sunday Series
of taking a look at some fabulous authors!



Hello Ruth, welcome to our Discovering Diamonds Guest Spot. Along with my readers and visitors I love to hear from authors who write wonderful stories. There’s nothing better than curling up with a good book,  box of chocs and glass of wine to hand!

Q. Would you like to tell us a little bit about yourself...
A. I had no idea what to do for a living when I left school, so I did an English degree, back in the days when students could get further education funded by the Government. Three years later I still didn’t know what to do (although I did know a lot more about Jane Austen) so I went to secretarial college and learned to type. Little did I suspect how useful that would turn out to be! 

I now write a series of murder mysteries set mostly in Roman Britain, and in more normal times I try to spend time every summer on archaeological digs, telling myself it’s research.

Q. Where do you live?
A. On the North Devon coast. I don’t want to make anybody jealous, but I can actually sit up in bed and see the sea. 

Q. If you had a choice to live anywhere – where would it be?
A. Right here. 

Q. Modern house, old cottage, castle or something else?
A.  Modern house. I’ve had my fill of spiders and draughts.

Q. Cat, dog or budgie?
A. Cat. Which means we can’t have either of the other two – at least, not with the cats we currently have. 

Q. Are you a ‘dining room for dinner’, or a ‘tray on your lap in front of the TV’ person?
A. Definitely a tray on the lap, and the latest episode of whichever box set we’re watching – at the moment it’s “Homeland”. 

Q. TV preferences – documentary, drama, comedy, soap or thriller?
A. Ah, I see now that I should have saved that last answer for this…Anything that’s well-written, and where I can’t guess what’s going to happen next. Or something that makes me laugh. 

Q. What was your first published novel about?
A. A Roman army medic arriving in Britannia for the first time. 


Q. What was your last novel about?
A. Er, a Roman army medic… still in Britannia, but he has managed to acquire a larger household that he knows what to do with, and an impressive list of solved murder mysteries. 


Q. Do you write in one genre or several?
A. Just the one, with the occasional break-out into a short story.

Q. Have you ever considered exploring a totally different genre?
A. Well… Before I was published I thought I might write a mega-bestselling literary romantic thriller, but then reality dawned. 

Q. If you could, which two of your characters would you like to invite to spend an afternoon with you?
A. Oh that’s tricky, because my main two characters run throughout the series. So it should be Ruso and Tilla, but I’d be tempted to include Albanus the nervous clerk, and his cheery wife Virana. Valens, Ruso’s best friend, would be great company if he managed to turn up. If he didn’t, he’d have a plausible excuse and it would always be somebody else’s fault.

Q. Where would you go / what would you do?
We’d go for a walk up the local hill, which has the earthworks of an Iron Age hillfort on it. Although the earthworks were put up long before their time, I’d see if any of them knew what it was used for and why the defences don’t seem to run all the way across the hill. Then I would take them home for tea and amaze them with electricity and a tap that delivers instant hot water.

Q. How do you prefer to travel? Plane, boat, car?
A. Car. Boats are unpredictable and there’s too much sitting still on planes. 

Q. You are out for a walk. You see a chap sitting on a wall, looking right fed up – but there’s something odd about him... What? And what do you do?
A. Well, this is a tricky one. How many other people are there around? How odd is he, exactly? I suspect if it was just him and me with nobody else in sight, I’d nod politely and keep walking unless he actually asked for help. And if he did, I’d make sure my phone was safely to hand. For someone who writes crime novels, I’m a bit of a wimp. But some years ago I wrote scripts for personal safety videos and one of the key messages was, “listen to your instincts”. (I bet that wasn’t the answer you were expecting, was it?!)

We have a long-running Radio programme here in the UK called Desert Island Discs on which celebrities talk about their life and select eight of their favourite discs... so changing that slightly...

Q. If you were shipwrecked on a desert island, what eight books would you want to find left in an abandoned hut? (There’s already a Bible, the Quran, and the complete works of Shakespeare)

1. The Road Less Travelled – M Scott Peck
2. Behind the scenes at the Museum – Kate Atkinson
3. The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe – CS Lewis
4. One of those big fat “Chronicle” history books with lots of pictures. Probably the one on Britain and Ireland. Perhaps I would finally get my dates straight.
5. The sort of book we used to use to identify plants before the Internet took over. Richard Mabey’s “Flora Britannica” would be lovely but perhaps not much use on a desert island.
6. Any of the Mick Herron Slough House spy novels. 
7. Great Expectations - Dickens
8. Am I allowed the SAS Survival Manual? [Helen: yes OK!]

Q. What sort of island would you prefer, and why? (e.g. Desert Island... Hebridian Island...)
A. I think I’d need somewhere with water. So definitely not a desert, but the Hebrides would be a bit too bracing. How about a very small Channel Island?

Q. And you would be allowed one luxury item – what would you want it to be? (a boat or something to escape on isn’t allowed.)
A. A Djembe drum.


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