Our tale today: The place - the desert, near Jerusalem, the time - night, June 1192
DIAMONDS IN THE DESERT
from Men of the Cross
by
Charlene Newcomb
Charlene Newcomb
THE WINDSWEPT CLIFF STOOD like a lone
sentinel guarding a gate. The horses pawed the ground nervously. Henry stared
across the darkened valley. Lights glimmered on the horizon to the east like a
thousand torches guiding them home. Jerusalem.
Henry tightened his grip on Sombre,
wound his hands through the reins. For the second time in six months the army
lay within reach of the Holy City. Twelve miles. A day’s march, mayhap two. His
heartbeat quickened, and he thought he heard the war drums…but it was only the
whispers of the knights around him.
King Richard was silent. He wore a
white surcoat with the Templar cross over his mail. He’d pushed his hood back
to the dismay of his companions. His crimson cloak billowed out in the wind,
revealing a gilded scabbard and the jewel-encrusted hilt of his sword. Watching
him, Henry could see that Jerusalem might well be a hundred miles away. A
thousand. A sudden sadness, mayhap regret, tinged Richard’s eyes.
Robin dismounted and drew up beside the
king. Richard heaved a heavy sigh. He slid from Fauvel, his Cypriot warhorse.
Robin took the reins, handed both mounts to Henry’s care.
“Saladin mocks us.” Richard’s powerful
voice carried on the wind. He swept his hand to the north. “He sees us. Knows
we grow weak. He might swoop down and cross the plains at any moment, cut our
supplies from Jaffa.”
“But why risk his men?” Robin
asked.
Richard stood motionless, a deep frown
creasing his face. Henry knew the answer before the words spilled from the
king’s tongue. “He will not,” Richard said. “He needs only to wait us out. I
would swear that he whispers into the ear of Burgundy and his French, blotting
out all sense of reason. They will not heed the advice of the Templars and
Hospitallers. Why should the French believe those who have lived here twenty or
more years? What reason would those men have to suggest that laying siege to
Jerusalem is foolish?” Richard grabbed the hilt of his sword. “Yet here we find
ourselves within a few miles of the Holy City. If we advance, Saladin will
poison every watering hole from here to there. Our animals will die. He can
strike from the north, from the east and at our rearguard. Then what will we
have gained?”
Nothing, Henry thought. Only more dead. Each stronghold
the crusaders took, like the one at Darum a few weeks earlier, made little
difference in Saladin’s daily raids. The king’s scouts estimated Saladin had
fifteen thousand men in the hills and thousands inside Jerusalem’s walls.
Keeping the lines of supplies and communications open between the port cities
and the casals along the route to the Holy City was a deadly business.
Richard had not expected an answer from
Robin. He’d settled it in his own mind. “In the morning, we shall convene the
council and put an end to this.”
Henry sat rigid in his saddle. Was this
journey truly over? He tipped his head eastward. “The lights of Jerusalem
flicker like a candle in this wind.”
“A beautiful sight,” Stephan said. “It
reminds me of nights on the galleys when we would see lights from villages
along the coasts.”
A candle?” Richard eyed the Holy City.
“Saladin would squash that flame. He could destroy all that is holy to us and
we would be left here in complete darkness.” He whipped back into his saddle
and spurred Fauvel west towards the army’s campsite.
Robin grabbed his reins from Henry,
swung onto his horse’s back and galloped after the king.
Stephan scanned the diamond-studded sky. The waning moon washed the knights in pale golden light. “We can remember we stood here under the same stars that light Jerusalem.”
“And what of the men who died?” Henry
asked. “Was all this for naught?”
Stephan shook his head. “They trusted
their king. And their God. And, if I am to believe you, they have found
heaven.”
“And you?”
“I trust my king. Heaven?” Stephan’s
eyes reflected the soft light of the moon. “Is it not here, with friends like
you?”
Author's note: Diamonds were unknown to 12th century Englishmen. The first instance of the word appeared in the 14th century according to the Oxford English Dictionary. But Helen asked for diamonds, and we agreed that a little poetic license was all right. The wording in the published novel is 'star-studded' skies, but for this blog hop I give you 'diamond-studded' and hope this excerpt gives you a sense of war, love, hope, and friendship during the Third Crusade.
© Charlene Newcomb
About the Author:
Charlene Newcomb. Char. That’s me.
Librarian.
Navy vet.
Mom to 3 grown, amazing children.
I live in Kansas. Yes, Toto. Kansas.
Born & raised in South Carolina, I wanted a life of adventure and travel. I realized that dreams of hitting the big time with my all-girl rock band Liberation were just that – dreams. And becoming an astronaut wasn’t in the cards. So I joined the Navy to see the world and spent six years as a communications technician/voice language analyst. I fit college into my life (BA in History, and many years later an MA in Library Science). That desire to travel in space translated into writing science fiction: I published 10 short stories in the Star Wars Expanded Universe, many featuring a Rebel underground freedom fighter named Alex Winger. I have published 3 novels, one a contemporary drama, Keeping the Family Peace; the others, Men of the Cross and For King and Country (Books I & II of Battle Scars), allow me to share my love of history with readers. Book III of the series will be published in late 2018.
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15th December Charlene Newcomb Diamonds in the Desert
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Thanks Charlene! A great excerpt.
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteExcellent, atmospheric piece, Charlene. Thank you!
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed it, Richard. :)
DeleteGreat excerpt! And an inspired choice - a moment alone with the characters, rather than an action-packed scene allows us to meet these people and wonder about where they've come from and what's going to happen next. Thanks Char, I really enjoyed this!
ReplyDeleteThanks for commenting, Annie. As soon as Helen asked me to participate, I knew this was the scene I needed to include.
DeleteBeautiful and I loved the last sentence. Perfect for this time of year and for any other time too. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteThat's one my favorite sentences too - from the whole novel. I'm glad you enjoyed the scene.
DeleteYour write so beautifully, Char. In all the 'bash and crash' of war, there are always contemplative moments like this one. Thank you
ReplyDelete*blush* Thank you so much, Alison.
DeleteYour story transports me to the harsh desert that can be brutally burning by day yet equally chilly in the diamond studded skies- mirroring the fiery enthusiasm that propelled the crusaders though the cold and dark taste of defeat must have been crushing for them too. The 'starry night' image is just a perfect compliment to your excerpt, Charlene.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Nancy!
DeleteGreat choice of excerpt - and one can really feel just how frustrated Richard is. You know, of course, that I love Henry and Stepha to bits. Looking forward to the third instalment :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Anna :)
DeleteExcellent - tweeted
ReplyDeleteMany thanks, Antoine.
DeleteAn atmospheric piece and interesting exploration of the moment even an ambitious king has to face reality and make the decision to turn back.
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