Life is gentle. The fish are biting.
Violet Snodgrass
unfolded her wings and flew from the narrow, bell shaped flower. Pollen-laden stamens
tickled her toes as she glided by. Sunshine warmed her head. She fluttered
over their fairy village, a field of wild flowers that bordered a cotton field.
She laughed at the children who giggled as they tumbled leaf-to-leaf. From open
flowers, fairies waved at her when she passed. She floated toward the pond and
soon found her chums on an old tree stump.
“What are
you doing?” she asked when her feet touched the mossy wood.
“We’re going
fishing,” Thorn announced, his black eyes gazing at the still pond. Short
tempered, his words could stab an unsuspecting fairy into sudden flight.
“We found this
long stalk with shrivelled flower petals at the end.” Marigold waved it above
her head. Her button mouth curled into a pert grin. “The fish will love the
taste.”
Her voice
carried over the pond. A fish jumped. Water splashed.
“We don’t
eat fish,” Daisy said, her fair skin bright in the sunlight.
Thorn raised
the flower stem like a battle-pike. “It’ll be fun. We shall conquer this pond, and
enslave the fish.”
My daddy has plenty. My mama is
beautiful.
“Our parents
will be cross if we torment the shy beasties.” A cautious lass, Azalea’s
namesake only flowered for a short time each spring. She must live her life
carefully.
Leif shook
his head. “We’ll only coax them to the surface and talk to them.”
Violet smiled
at the gentle lad who loved to explore tree roots for the crawly things they
provided.
“How will
you do it?” Camellia, the sweetest of them all, ran her finger down the bent
stalk that would be their fishing rod.
“From the
lily pads. The fish live under them. Who’s coming with me?” Thorn flew to the
lilies and settled on a pad. He sank to his knees and looked into the water.
“Hey, there’s something down there, and it’s big.”
Everyone
flew to the lily pads. Violet wondered what could be under the water, for they
rarely saw anyone from outside their world, except when the big people planted
or picked cotton, a gruelling job by the look of it.
Burr dunked
the flower into the pond and waggled the shrivelled petals. Insects swarmed,
then settled closer to the water. Suddenly, something big rose to the surface.
His snout emerged to nibble the insects. He sank, again, to the bottom of the
pond.
“Oh no! A
trout,” Burr cried as if frightened. “They eat fairies.” He smirked and Violet
frowned. His prickly wit annoyed her most of the time.
“I’ve never
heard that.” Daisy took a step backwards, her heel on the edge of the lily pad.
Burr waggled
his brow. “They do.” He pushed the stem deeper, wiggling it in front of the big
trout.
I will be strong. I will not cry.
“You are
trying to scare us,” Violet snapped.
“Ha!” Burr
jumped up and down on the pad.
“Stop it.
Stop it right now,” the fairies cried. “You’ll make us fall in the pond. Our
wings will get slimy.”
He fell on
his back, laughing and kicking his feet. Wilted petals floated in the pond.
Insects danced in a cloud above the water.
The big
trout’s snout broke the surface. He bit off the soggy petals and chewed. Burr
jumped to his feet, his curly red hair in sharp spikes about his head. “Why did
you do that?”
The fish gazed
at them, his eyes sad. “Why do you torment me? I am the king of trout, and this
pond is my castle.” He spat a bead of water. It arced and hit Burr on the nose.
He scrubbed
his face. “That wasn’t nice.”
“Burr, you
are not nice,” Violet scolded. She turned to the king of trout. “How big is
your kingdom?”
He waved his
fin and water rippled. “My kingdom is as far as you can see.”
I rise on the morning mist, and
sing.
Violet fluttered
into the air. The area lush with trees and flowers, a stream bubbled from the
pond, a path that flowed beyond reach. A gate of treacherous rocks protected
the entrance, with a big fish guarding all who would enter. Many waited at the
gate, their tails swaying in the current.
She flew
back to the lilies where the king of trout spoke in a low, rumbling voice to
her chums. They sat on the pads and listened intently to his majesty’s wisdom.
Her eyes met
King Trout’s. He nodded at her.
My wings will take me into the
sky.
“My kingdom
protects your kingdom from the pixies that live in the moorland beyond this
pond.”
“And our
kingdom protects yours,” Leif interjected. “We keep the bears and humans away
so that you may live in peace.”
Violet smiled.
She remembered Dad telling her this one evening as they sat down to a supper of
nectar and seed cakes.
The king of
trout regally nodded, then he took a bite of swirling insects. He winked at
Violet.
As if the
fairies suddenly realised the danger, they jumped to their feet. Their wings
buzzed and whirred. “Pixies are wicked creatures. They tease everyone.”
Fat tears
dropped onto Camellia’s pale cheeks. “I want my mum and dad.”
“But we need
their pixie dust to fly.” Azalea’s wings thrummed. Sparkling dust flowed from
gossamer feathers.
Burr and
Thorn stood with their wings tucked together; their fists jabbed the air.
“We’ll protect you.”
King Trout
banged his tail on the muddy pond floor, summoning his army. Soon, the water
darkened with sleek bodies, side-by-side, heads-to-tails as they gave homage to
their king.
“The pixies
will come soon,” his majesty calmly said, his snout and eyes surrounded by
other noses and eyes.
I am safe with my daddy and mama
at my side.
The bright
sun dimmed as a cloud of chattering pixies rose in the sky. Their sharp teeth
glistened, their beady eyes full of mischief, they swooped over the pond,
menaced Violet and her friends.
Trout
soldiers jumped out of the water, their jaws snapping at the pixies, who
screamed and laughed. They swiped at the fish’s snouts, grabbed Violet’s and
her friends’ hair and clothes. The trout spat pebbles at the pixies, who leapt
out of the way with shouts of glee. Pixie dust rained on them, fell into the
water and onto the grasses that lined the pond.
Fairy adults
swept into the fray. They fought the pixies with their wands. Sharp petals
poured over the pixies who brushed them away. “We like heather, not these
spikey flower petals. Stop. Stop, we say.” They shivered and more fairy dust
fell.
Shamans and
priestesses held diaphanous veils aloft to catch pixie dust. When piles and
piles of sparkling dust filled the veils, ready to drop off the edges, and into
the pond, they lugged away their catch.
Violet’s
father and mother flew over them, Dad’s arms outspread. “Halt!”
Mum smiled
and nodded.
The trout
and fairy realms grew tired and frail in the gathering dusk. Pixies floated
above the pond. Fairies fluttered about the grassy verge, their breaths heavy
from battle. The trout army sank beneath the surface, their ripples producing
little waves onshore.
Violet sank
onto the lily pad and smiled at her dad. Proud of him, she wanted to fly into
his arms for a gentle hug, but as their leader, it would have to wait.
“This battle
is finished. We will now go to our dinners of berries and perfumed honey.” With
confidence and pride, her parents’ larger than normal wings took them away from
the lily-pond. They led the way to their village in the flowers that surrounded
the cotton field.
Violet’s
wings took her into the air. They buzzed her past the villagers to her father
where she took his hand.
He gave her
a little squeeze and a wink. “Well done, sweet daughter. Well done.”
© Katherine Pym
song: Summertime from Gershwin's opera Porgy and Bess
Katherine Pym enjoys travel, and shares her time between Seattle
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Utterly enchanting story with one of my favorite songs, their warmth sorely needed as trees and bushes are weighted down under a thick coat of ice here.
ReplyDeleteYour story is full of poetry, Katherine; I loved it. Now, at this midnight hour, I shall go back to bed and dream of winged fairies, lily ponds, and summer.
Thanks so much for your kind words. They are very much appreciated.
DeleteOh how beautiful! I just love this song whoever sings it and your wonderful prose evokes such images of lying beside a river bank, half asleep in the hot sun whilst this goes on unseen yet still very real! Well done, Kathryn!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much. I wanted something soft and breezy when this published during the heavy storms of winter.
DeleteWhat a wonderful little story - I didn't expect Discovering Diamonds to attract its own fairies - how magical! Thank you, Katherine.
ReplyDeleteI am blushing with your kind words.
DeleteLoved it - full of light and hope and warmth. Like drinking a cup of summer in the middle of the winter!
ReplyDeleteLovely praise from you Anna, with your own lyrical tales. Hugs,
ReplyDeleteSo breezy, as you said. Much enjoyed.
ReplyDeleteThanks very much, Diane.
DeleteAn ingenious re-imagining!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much!
DeleteWhat a delightful story! I love your grittier stories, but apparently your talents have no bounds! The song is a favorite of mine, too, as well as I loves you Porgy.
ReplyDeleteI loved singing this song, but can't get up that high anymore. It's like Mozart's The Flute, a very high, at the ceiling soprano. LOL.
DeleteLovely! Evokes memories of my childhood - summer days hanging out with my friends by the creek. (But no attacking pixies back then!)
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Char. I, too, remember those simpler days where I dipped my toe in the water and chatted with friends.
DeleteUtterly magical. Thank you for a great read.
ReplyDeleteYou are so very welcome. May your holidays be blissful, your new year filled with peace.
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